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Issue 5 - General Feedback

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« Reply #15 on: September 13, 2008, 01:46:32 pm »

I'm liking it already though I'm not done reading.  So far the dorms and high contrast articles are really cool.  And I'm enjoying the chairs page :D

Just noticed though, a couple of objects from pg16 are linked to wrong sites.
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« Reply #16 on: September 13, 2008, 03:52:57 pm »

Thank you for letting us know Smiley We'll have a look at it and fix it.
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« Reply #17 on: September 27, 2008, 09:15:55 am »

There's a couple of errors I've spotted.
On your "Apartments of the world" section, clicking 'next' after the Tijuana article leads straight on to the article about sushi, completely skipping over the New York article, only accessible by clicking the 'previous' button. After clicking 'previous' on the Tijuana article, I'm also lead back to the New York article, meaning I'm stuck in a loops of sorts unless I go back to the index.
You also need to sort out your grammar. There are commas all over the place, for example
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Smith Estates is a website, which hosts designs of contemporary houses...
There shouldn't be a comma there. I also noticed the dreaded "It's" several times!
Also, I question your usage of "Casanova" to describe a female student. Casanova was a womaniser, and has connotations of masculinity. Maybe "Maneater" would have been a better suited term.
I hope you don't think I'm trying to tear your magazine apart, but I think you should get someone to check over it before you publish.
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« Reply #18 on: September 27, 2008, 09:55:19 am »

(I'm sorry if I'm not posting this at the right place)

I liked the magazine as usual Smiley but I wonder if the smith-estate.com link is supposed to work because it doesn't work for me  Embarrassed

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« Reply #19 on: September 27, 2008, 10:00:52 am »

I think they might have closed down their site, I had trouble with it as well then I was uploading the magazine
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« Reply #20 on: September 27, 2008, 11:13:46 am »

Yeah...Thanks for the fast answer anyway Smiley
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